In the next editing session, although the editing is overall completed there is always room for improvement. Some feedback that we had been given was, that overall the performance footage is quite static and a little boring, as it is just a image of them playing for 22 seconds. the feedback given was that also we tried to use the ken burns maybe adding more of a variety of shot types such as close ups, zooms, behind the shoulder would allow for more variety and create a more exciting piece of footage.
Also another criticism that we had was the father bit, with the photo in the hallway, the feedback given for this was that it was a bit random as he just walks through the door and starts shouting where as we could add an image of him walking back through the door so therefore Emily can bring Etienne through the house. We will come together soon and proceed to edit these.
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